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Monday, September 23, 2019
kapa haka
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my speech
Dogs are better than cats
today i will be convincing you to like dogs better than cats my target audience is People who like cats better than dogs, I think most people would agree that dogs are way better than cats because dogs are playful cuddly and adorable these points will be explained further in the speech.
1. Dogs are way more fun
Because they are so playful and love playing games with their owner for example dogs love playing fetch,going for walks and just generally having fun with you.
2.Secondly dogs can have many kinds of human food
But with cats they can only have certain things and you have to be very careful because if you give it the wrong thing it could die or get really sick and that could mean you would have to pay for the vet nobody wants that but with dogs there are only a few things that they can't eat like grapes chocolate onions etc.
3. Also dogs can help you get fit
As I said before, dogs are very active, which means you have to be very active in order to stay by your dog's side at all times meaning you would be having to run walk throw chase and hold heavy things that can be good exercise and your having fun with your dog who doesn’t like that.
did you know ? that 71% of people choose dogs and only 41% choose cats because as every one knows dogs have been a mans best friend for years so there are my reasons and I hope that I have convinced you to like dogs more than cats bye and thank you for listening to my speech.
comment down below what you thought thanks bye =)
today i will be convincing you to like dogs better than cats my target audience is People who like cats better than dogs, I think most people would agree that dogs are way better than cats because dogs are playful cuddly and adorable these points will be explained further in the speech.
1. Dogs are way more fun
Because they are so playful and love playing games with their owner for example dogs love playing fetch,going for walks and just generally having fun with you.
2.Secondly dogs can have many kinds of human food
But with cats they can only have certain things and you have to be very careful because if you give it the wrong thing it could die or get really sick and that could mean you would have to pay for the vet nobody wants that but with dogs there are only a few things that they can't eat like grapes chocolate onions etc.
3. Also dogs can help you get fit
As I said before, dogs are very active, which means you have to be very active in order to stay by your dog's side at all times meaning you would be having to run walk throw chase and hold heavy things that can be good exercise and your having fun with your dog who doesn’t like that.
did you know ? that 71% of people choose dogs and only 41% choose cats because as every one knows dogs have been a mans best friend for years so there are my reasons and I hope that I have convinced you to like dogs more than cats bye and thank you for listening to my speech.
comment down below what you thought thanks bye =)
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